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(Italy X Reader) New Boyfriend
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---Reader POV---
You were getting ready to meet up with (b/n), your boyfriend, when you got a text. You instantly grabbed your phone thinking that it was him asking you if you were ready yet....Well you got part of it right......it was him…...but he wasn’t asking you if you were ready…...the text read:
(Y/n), I know we had a date planned for today but I can’t see you anymore…. I have fallen in love with someone else. Bye.
At first you didn’t understand. You re-read it a few more times trying to realize what he said. Finally, when you understood what he meant you put your face into your hands and started to cry.
After you cried for a while you decided that you wanted to go to your best friend Feliciano’s house.  You texted him asking if you come over and within seconds he replied saying that you could.
---Italy POV---
I was making pasta when I heard my phone go off. I
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(Germany X Reader) A Long Awaited Love
NOTE: Hey guys, sorry if this sucks. It’s my first time writing one. If there is anything I can do better please tell me. Now on with the story!
You admired everything about him. From his gorgeous blue eyes to his perfectly toned body. You had always loved him, but he could never know because he was your closest friend. You would die if he ever knew.
*Flashback*
You were talking to your best friend (Bff/n). “(Y/n) you have had a crush on him for over 3 years now, you need to tell him.” “If I ever did that I would die. Plus, he doesn’t even like me, he and I have been best friends since we were in 1st grade. I never want to ruin that.” you said.  Your friend shakes her head and said, “It’s now or never.” You started to think about that, you look at her and shook your head. You couldn’t tell him.
*Flashback end*
It’s been a few weeks since your friend told you that. It still lingered
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---Reader POV---

You were getting ready to meet up with (b/n), your boyfriend, when you got a text. You instantly grabbed your phone thinking that it was him asking you if you were ready yet....Well you got part of it right......it was him…...but he wasn’t asking you if you were ready…...the text read:

(Y/n), I know we had a date planned for today but I can’t see you anymore…. I have fallen in love with someone else. Bye.

At first you didn’t understand. You re-read it a few more times trying to realize what he said. Finally, when you understood what he meant you put your face into your hands and started to cry.

After you cried for a while you decided that you wanted to go to your best friend Feliciano’s house.  You texted him asking if you come over and within seconds he replied saying that you could.

---Italy POV---

I was making pasta when I heard my phone go off. I hoped that it was my best friend (Y/n). I always liked it when she and I hung out but she had a boyfriend and I was kinda jealous. After I washed my hands I picked up my phone and read the message. It said:

Feli, is it okay if I come over. I have to talk to you. PLEASE!

I giggled at the fact that she was begging to come over and talk. As soon as I as done having my giggling fit I texted her saying that she could.  I started to clean up my mess and make things look nice and then my phone went off again.

I’m on my way. See you in a few!

I smiled at my phone knowing how happy she was to get to talk to me.

---Reader POV---

You got ready and got in your car and drove away. You didn’t care if you looked like crap you just needed to talk to Feliciano. He would comfort you and make you smile and that’s exactly what you needed.

You just wanted him to reassure you that you don’t need (b/n), that you have him to make you feel better, you have all of your friends.

When you finally got to his house (which was only a few blocks away but it felt like forever) you walked up and knocked. You heard a lot of rustling and then he unlocked the door to let you in.

Feliciano almost knocked you over with a hug while saying, “ ̴Veee. Bella, you got here. Please come in.” You walked into his house. He instantly walked to the couch and sat down. He motioned you to come and sit. You went and sat next to him and you started to cry without realizing it.

“Bella? Why are you crying?” You wiped your face but that didn’t help the fact that tears were still rolling down your cheek.

---Italy POV---

When I heard (Y/n) knock I was so excited that I practically fell into the door before opening it. After I let (Y/n) in, I sat down and motioned her to me. When she sat down she started to cry. I was worried, normally she smiles when she’s over. She always seems to be in a good mood, even if I knock her over with my hugs. But for some reason she wasn’t in her bubbly mood like normal. “Bella? What’s wrong?”

She wiped tears from her face that she didn’t even know were there. She looked up at me and her beautiful (e/c) eyes looked into mine. After looking into her (e/c) orbs for a little bit I understood what was making her cry. I instantly hug her telling her that (b/n) was an idiot for breaking up with her. “Why would anyone want to break up with such a beautiful young woman, who treats everyone with such kindness?”  I thought.

---Reader POV ---

You stared into his eyes trying to get him to understand without saying anything. After he caught on with what happened he pulled you into a big hug. He said, “(Y/n), (b/n) was an idiot.” As he started to pull away you felt even more sad. “I want him to hug me forever,” you thought.

You looked up at him and blushed. You hadn’t realized how much you like him. You smile at him and tell him that you feel a little better. He is happy that he could help. “(Y/n), you can stay here for a while and we can talk if you want.” You smile even more and nod quickly.

---Time Skip--- (still Reader POV)

You had been talking to Feliciano for what felt like was the past few hours. He surely knew how to make you feel better. You two had laughed and enjoyed each other’s company for most of the day. When you finally checked your phone for the time you noticed that you had been having so much fun with Feliciano that you had been there for eight hours. “Feli, it’s getting late I better go.” You started to leave when you looked back at him to say bye. You noticed a small frown placed on his lips.

---Italy POV---

When (Y/n) started to leave I looked at her frowning. She turned to look at me and say bye when she noticed. “Feli, what’s wrong?” she asked. I looked into her (e/c) eyes and opened my mouth to say something but I couldn’t form the right words to say. I get up and walk to her with a light blush on my cheeks. I hugged her again. She stiffened up at first but relaxed after a little bit.

---Reader POV---

You asked him what was wrong and he looked as if he was going to answer, but instead he walked up to you and hugged you. After you two hugged for a while he finally pulled away with a light blush on his cheeks. You blushed a little but then you asked him a question. It caught him off-guard when you asked him. “F-Feli, w-why did you hug me?”

He looked away from you trying to hide his blush growing darker. He looked at you again and he tried to tell you. “(Y/n), I-I---I--“You started to giggle at the fact that he was blushing and stuttering.

“(Y/n), what I’m t-trying to s-say is that I-I---“ You started to get nervous at what he was trying to say. “Feli, just tell me. Don’t be afraid to tell me what’s on your mind.” He smiled at you and then he finally got the courage to tell you. “(Y/n), ti amo.”

You were confused until he put his head down to whisper in your ear, “I love you, (Y/n)” After he said that he kissed your cheek. You hugged him and said, “Feli, I love you too.” He had a huge smile on his face and then he kissed your lips getting a small squeak from you. You two kissed until you needed air.  

He picked you up bridal style and carried you to the couch. He set you down and then he got comfortable. You were resting your head on his chest listening to his heart beat when you looked up at him and said, “Feli, I am so happy that (b/n) broke up with me.” Feliciano tensed up at the thought of (b/n). He instantly relaxed when you started to fall asleep. “Me too…..me too.” “Damn! How did I get so lucky?” he thought.

---Next Morning---

You two had fallen asleep there. You woke up before Feliciano did. You wouldn’t dare move from his embrace. All you could do was lay there and blush at the fact that he was your boyfriend. “Damn! How did I get so lucky?” You thought.
NOTE: Hey guys, sorry if this sucks. It’s my first time writing one. If there is anything I can do better please tell me. Now on with the story!


You admired everything about him. From his gorgeous blue eyes to his perfectly toned body. You had always loved him, but he could never know because he was your closest friend. You would die if he ever knew.

*Flashback*

You were talking to your best friend (Bff/n). “(Y/n) you have had a crush on him for over 3 years now, you need to tell him.” “If I ever did that I would die. Plus, he doesn’t even like me, he and I have been best friends since we were in 1st grade. I never want to ruin that.” you said.  Your friend shakes her head and said, “It’s now or never.” You started to think about that, you look at her and shook your head. You couldn’t tell him.

*Flashback end*

It’s been a few weeks since your friend told you that. It still lingered in your mind. You had thought about it and you just couldn’t get the confidence to tell him. You tried so many times to say something about it to him and all you could do was smile and run away. You finally gave up trying and just tried to make everything seem like it was normal.

Of course your BFF (Bff/n) had a plan to have him find out.

You were in band, and so was your bff and your crush. You guys had to go play at a football game so you guys were waiting for it to be time to play so you sat and talked.

“So Ludwig, what’s new?” you ask. “Same old, same old. Training, getting school work done, hanging out with friends.” “Well that seems like a lot of fun,” You said trying to stop yourself from blushing. It wasn’t working all that well because your BFF noticed. “Aww, (Y/n) is blushing! And I know why. (Y/n) likes Ludwig!” Ludwig was blushing. You ran towards the parking lot crying, Ludwig ran after you.

“(Y/n). (Y/n)! Stop! I need to talk to you!” You finally stopped and turned around, you couldn’t look at him so you stared at the ground. He lifted your chin so he could see your face. “(Y/n) please stop crying.” You wiped your face and looked at the ground again and asked him, “Ludwig why did you follow me? I….”

You squeaked when he cut you off with a gentle kiss on the cheek.
He lifted your chin again so he could look at your beautiful (e/c) eyes. “(Y/n) I love you. I guess I couldn’t tell you because I thought that you wouldn’t like me back. But when (Bff/n) said that you liked me I…I….”

You cut him off with a gentle kiss and he stiffened up a first but then he slowly melted into it. But (sadly) you guys need to stop for a breath. You looked at him and blushed. Finally, he said “So… I guess that we are….uhhh….” You kissed him again and said, “Yes, we are boyfriend and girlfriend.” He blushed again and hug you tight.

**********OPTIONAL ENDING**********

Then your BFF ran over and saw you and Ludwig hugging. She squealed loudly and started to yell, “(Y/n) and Ludwig are together finally!” People looked to see what all the racket was about. When you and Ludwig finally realized what was going on you two stopped hugging. But in place of the hug your faces were a bright red. You walked to your BFF and said, “(Bff/n) you are so….so…..uggg” Then Ludwig picked you up bridal style and carried you to his car and drove somewhere more private.

Ludwig leaned into your ear and said, “(Y/n)?” You looked at him questioningly. “Do you think that (Bff/n) had this all planned out?” You laugh, “Yeah I think she did, but let’s not let her know that we figured it out.” He chuckled and nodded his head, “Agreed.”

Then he wrapped his arms around your waist and pulled you in for a kiss. You wrapped one arm around his neck and the other one went to his hair to mess it up. Before he kissed you he whispered in your ear, “Let’s have some fun.” You giggled and kissed him

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Dina-soar Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2017
Thanks for the watch!!:D
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Thank you so much for the watch!!!
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Thank you for the fav!!! have a liama!
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Thank you for the watch and all the faves, I really appreciate that you took the time to fave them all! You're awesome ^^
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onakohrs24 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2017
You're very welcome! I literally stayed up for an hour and a half reading all of them. I wish I could write as well as you do.
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IAmFandomHearMeRoar Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww thank you! ^^ Not to worry, you'll get there haha. I didn't have time to read it, but I saw on your page that you had written your first XReader not too long ago. That's awesome! I've been writing since I was probably 8 or 9 haha, so I've been practicing for 16 years now XD I'm not honestly that good, I'm just veryveryvery practiced. You'll come along! With every story you write, you get just a little bit better. If you ever want any tips, feel free to ask! I'm pretty busy lately but I'll get back to you ASAP :3
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onakohrs24 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2017
Well I have been wanting to write some for quite some time but I never get the chance to so finally when I had some free time I did. I think they turned out okay, but I feel like there is a lot of work to be done to get them better. And I agree that the more I write the better I'll get. >u<
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Thanks for the watch! ^^
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Thank you for the watch~ <3
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Thank you for much for the watch!!! <3
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